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6/3/16

100 Word Challenge #20

For my 100 WC this week the prompt was to write what the conversation that the man and the statue had on the bench seat. 

Here is my version:

“Finally, I thought you would never come!” Exclaimed the Bench Statue!
“I’m sorry!” apologised the man.
“What held you up?”  
“Work has a massive project on; and Mr Marction gets so angry when employees take breaks to come to the cafe, especially when business is booming! Infact he never lets anyone out for over half an hour in between 12 and 2.”
“Man he sounds like a total control freak! Anyway I’m hungry, you've already come 1 hour later than usual!”

“Maybe you should share your secret with some other people, you’re bound to get lonely with me kept hostage in that building!”

7 comments:

  1. This is a funny 100WC Nikita. No wonder you got in the top 10 for 100WC. How long did it take you to write this?

    Can't wait to see your next 100WC!

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    1. Thanks Katie!
      Man it took forever to get to 100 words, and I still haven't got there!
      I don't particularly like writing stories where people speak, but then I suppose most stories have people speaking in them! ;)

      Great job on your 100WC too Katie, I am going to read it now! ;)

      -Nikita
      Rimu Class

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  2. Haha - Great use of dialogue Nikita! Did you know 'in fact' is actually two words? I like your specific nouns - makes it much more interesting! Hope you're having a great day! :)

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    1. Really!? I've always seen it as one word - interesting!
      Thanks for commenting! :)

      -Nikita
      Rimu Class

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  3. Geeky Norman6/6/16, 1:38 PM

    Hi, Nikita your story is really cool. By the looks of it you are a good writer. (keep on doing your great work)

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    1. Thanks :) Do you do the 100 WC?

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  4. Wow, This is a funny. You really good writer.
    Can't wait to see your next 100WC
    - Jorja :)

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