100 Word Challenge Week #9

I am back and writing 100 Word Challenges again! 

The class took a bit of a break because we had events and stuff on, so this is my first one in about 5 weeks. 

The prompt was to add ...as the smoke cleared... in our writing. 

Please read and comment on my work!

The choking smoke stuck to my throat and soon poured into my lungs; it was stinging my eyes so that the only thing I could only see was the faint fuzzy outline of his body through the smoke and tears. The mans strong voice was slowly being drowned in piercing screams that were shattering my brain along with all the confusion.

I was spluttering everywhere; and as I dragged my leg forward to take my next step my body gave in to the pain and distress.

But that was not the end, as something was revealed as the smoke cleared.

100 Word Challenge Week #9

I am back and writing 100 Word Challenges again! 

The class took a bit of a break because we had events and stuff on, so this is my first one in about 5 weeks. 

The prompt was to add ...as the smoke cleared... in our writing. 

Please read and comment on my work!

The choking smoke stuck to my throat and soon poured into my lungs; it was stinging my eyes so that the only thing I could only see was the faint fuzzy outline of his body through the smoke and tears. The mans strong voice was slowly being drowned in piercing screams that were shattering my brain along with all the confusion.

I was spluttering everywhere; and as I dragged my leg forward to take my next step my body gave in to the pain and distress.

But that was not the end, as something was revealed as the smoke cleared.

100 Word Challenge 'The Wonders of the forest'

Hey bloggers, I haven't been posting for a while which is bad on my part so I will make sure that I am regularly putting work up here for you guys to read! 

Anyway here is my 100 WC for this week, the prompt is to write a story about this picture:

Please enjoy and comment! (^o^)

I took a wrong turn, but never will I regret it.

Being lost had never been so beautiful; magical, it was exquisite.

The trees were ignored, they were being engulfed in beauty, by the wonders of the forest.

The night was lite up, I could feel the vibration of the hum that they put out.

Like a sign that they were expecting my presence. 

I was being recognized, I just knew it. 

They enjoyed my being there. 

But why then, was this so confusing 

It all seemed inhuman, they were small elegant lights, dancing in night. 

What a lucky turn.

100 Word Challenge - Unjustly Imprisoned

The 100 Word Challenge Prompt for this for this week is writing about this photo, which is a cell in Alcatraz Prison off the coast of San Fransico in the US. 

We were told to consider these questions:

Why would you be put in this cell?

How does it feel to be locked up? 

Is it possible to escape? 

Could you think of a plan?

What is special about Alcatraz?

Here is my 100 Word Challenge:

I gave up; my body was physically drained from continuous crying, and my stomach ached from curving over.
But no one cared. 

I let the distress come.
Being unjustly imprisoned was beyond anything I had ever experienced, or could handle. Innocence was all that I fought for, but now my fight is with freedom. 

Agony and self pity took over, horrible thoughts filled my head, traveling so fast that they collided and nightmares were all that could be made. 

I pushed my tear stained face further into the musty sheets, as the anger built up inside of me was released.

100 Word Challenge Week 22

The Prompt this week is to add the 5 words Airplane, Yellow, Violin, Eaten, and Swept

Flight 556 was called for the final time at Amsterdam airport and then the airplane, bound for London, disappeared into the majestic white clouds.

Packed inside the small baggage compartment above the seats, sat the little yellow suitcase carrying the small vintage violin.

David sat relaxed in the middle row of the plane. He had just eaten a wonderful meal.

Staring at the air hostess who swept the isle floor, he thought about his daughter that would soon meet him at the airport.

He couldn't wait to see her face when he gives her the gift she has always wanted.

100 Word Challenge #20

For my 100 WC this week the prompt was to write what the conversation that the man and the statue had on the bench seat. 

Here is my version:

“Finally, I thought you would never come!” Exclaimed the Bench Statue!

“I’m sorry!” apologised the man.

“What held you up?”  

“Work has a massive project on; and Mr Marction gets so angry when employees take breaks to come to the cafe, especially when business is booming! Infact he never lets anyone out for over half an hour in between 12 and 2.”

“Man he sounds like a total control freak! Anyway I’m hungry, you've already come 1 hour later than usual!”

“Maybe you should share your secret with some other people, you’re bound to get lonely with me kept hostage in that building!”

100 Word Challenge #19

Hey everyone here is this weeks 100 WC with the prompt …as the flame flickered and then went out…

Each step that we took further into the thick undergrowth became more difficult. 

Our tour guide is useless, utterly useless! 
He is afraid of virtually everything, every crack, crumple and creek! 

As the sun sets, one of our only sources of light, we try to make the most out of the vague instruction he gives us. 
We gather some twigs, and using the last match we have, strike it against our small match box.

The silence caused such for a depressing mood, and it was lingering in the night air. 

Then, fear as the flame flickered and then went out.

100 Word Challenge Week #18

This week for my 100 WC, the prompt that we had to follow was to write a story with the words Silence, Swam, Orange, Pajamas and Thunder in it. 
These words I have highlighted in bold.
I was focusing of writing exactly 100 words this week, and thankfully after a lot of work of squeezing and arranging words, I made that happen!  
Have a read and tell me what you think, would you like to do this? 

The dull silence was unbearable.
The only sound was the water that swam and sloshed around us. 

A ship had been and gone, but never stopped; it just kept moving forward, slowly into the burnt orange sunset.

We sat adrift, dad was trying to keep the mood positive, but we all could hear the quiver and shaking behind his calming words. 

Mum sent us to bed.
I changed into my pajamas, and while I was lying there, I could hear the faint sound of thunder quaking in the distance.

I pulled the covers over my head, wishing it never began.

100 Word Challenge Week 1

Every week my class are participating in the 100 Word Challenge. 
We have to write a story between 90-110 words based on the prompt that is given to us every week.
This week the prompt was describing what kind of a world we would step into if we went through a door that was at the end of a stairway going up to the sky. 
Here is my first 100wc: 

The magnificent white marble staircase sat in an ever turning spiral; unaware, unknown. 
It pulled at me, urging me to glide up and step through it’s wonderful mirrored arch. 
So I did. 

Where I came through was on a tall hill overlooking the strange little kingdom I had entered. 
Everyone had their own house, and own piece of land.
But every little person was golden, like little statues moving around.

Most of me wanted to go back, but a part of me felt like I belonged down there with them.

100 WC 'Rush Out The Door"

"The bus will be here soon kids," called Mum "make sure you are out of you Pajamas!" 

Ubin, and Jake were rushing to get their bags ready for school, their room was a mess, Jake was rushing to find his socks and spelling book. 

Mum's head ached as she was rushing around the kitchen, using the last scraps of vegemite on the the toast that was burning, and she was rushingly ripping through the knots in Ubin's hair. 

Then the bus honked!

They rushed out of the door with whatever they had on, grabbing their lunch from Mum on the way out as she kissed them goodbye.

The usual morning!

100 Word Challenge ...it felt like...

The hills looked taller, and more darker in the shadows.

The sea was more rough and greener than yesterday, and the wind; it felt like whips, lashing out and striking my cheeks until they became beetroot red. Behind me, the poles that were holding down our tent that we were camping in, were almost coming out of the ground.

Little sand storms were forming on the beach, but it was deserted, infact no one else's tent was even in the camp ground.

Suddenly the air got extremely hot, and turning towards the hills, I realised why we were alone...

100 Word Challenge Term 4 Week 1 2015

The Ted's big black car was full with his furry friends.
He was able to get possession of it, off a uncle's sister's friend, who knows a guy, who knew and guy, with a car that was locked up in a well fortified garage. So the the bears uncle's sister's friend, who knows a guy, who knew a guy with the big black's arch enemy, had plotted a plan to steal the car. Which failed and fell into the hands of the guy who knows a guy's friend's, sister's Uncle, ted.